I never considered attempting to write anything meaningful, much less poetry, until a buddy asked for help when he suffered a broken heart. We were 18. He had it bad for a girl we worked with. She had a boyfriend (who was a jerk). My friend was giving up, but he wanted to send her flowers and a poem for her birthday. He couldn't come up with anything and asked me for help. I thought about what he was feeling and wrote this:
The flowers are to let you know
Just exactly how I feel.
About a love I can never show
And a heart I can never steal.
It was bad, but it did get him a pity date. Really, he was too good for her.
The main reason I remember it is because at the time I thought, "Hmmm, I might be able to use this myself someday." But the opportunity never arose. Since then I've mostly avoided writing poetry. Until...
Rooth challenged readers
"Compose a haiku or two"
Embarrassed myself
Or did she just share some and I took it as a challenge? No, no, I'm pretty sure she invited others to join in. I think I wrote two: one defending men and the other slamming them--I like to explore both sides of an issue.
PS - Of course my friend wasn't really giving up. That's just something guys say when they decide to make a grand gesture after months of failure. DO NOT BE FOOLED! :D
PS ll - The title was inspired by a childhood taunt, "You're a poet and don't know it, but your feet sure show it. They're Loooongfellows!"
I like the first poem. It rhymes :).
ReplyDeletelol, thank you! I told rooth haikus always made my brain hurt. But she inspired me to give them a try.
DeleteWe are certainly rhyming fools Rick and should be getting something out of it. Starting a greeting card line - now that's an idea
ReplyDeleteI'm envisioning a whole line of funny "you owe me money" cards. :)
DeleteRoses are red
ReplyDeletePoems are fun to write
It's raining here in Boston
I wish it was sunny and bright
xo, Yi-chia
Always Maylee
Awesome! (I hope the rain clears out soon)
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